• Rely less on the audience needing to read the sequence
• Much to text
• Loose globe sequence
• Video to flat colours is interesting
• Look at bupa adverts
• With transport be careful of brands because it video may bee shown wider than Eastbourne
• Bad grammar
• Make the image and text look like an iconic image from the 40s and 50s
• Integrate the text and graphics better
• Think of a more general message
After looking at these comments I am going to look into making the sequence more like American 40s and 50s art and in my comments I got suggestions of poster to look at like
• Dig for victory
• Your country needs you
• Make do and mend
• Keep calm and carry on
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