Class Comments

After presenting my movies to the class and Nick and here are the comments that I got back…

• Good quality footage from a zi8
• They have charm to them
• The general one is good
• Your country needs you poster could be copyright
• Could use a classmate as the image for your country needs you
• Change paragraph at the bottom of your general
• Might be easier to use the titles from you films because they are shore and to the point
• Change the style of imagery at the end of your transport one because it dosent look war like
• Spin the message to a positive
• Try car sharing today helps the climate
• Sort out the white on the handle on the spade so the background comes through with dig for victory

Nicks comments

• People might find it hard to understand the topic of your film (general)
• Change phrase to “ Dig for victory, helps fight climate change”

I am now going to review both my comments and sequences and decide on what to change