Comments on Animatics

After asking for comments about my animatics from classmates and teaching staff this is the feedback that I got...

• improve the style of the tumbe weed/ brush
  
• make Jack Daniels poster look weathered
  
• Do not use the photo inside the saloon
  
• Keep the saloon building
  
• separately animate the bull
  
• loose the long background strip
• too predictable
• add detail to cow
  
• add different camera views
  
• split the legs but so they move together parent the layers
• shift the poster to the left or right
  
• enlarge the slogan
• add slogan word by word
  
• add depth or texture to the floor
• blur the horizon
• move something to the beat of the music
  
• add a face
  
• could use twigs or grass for tumble weed