Class Crit Comments

Here are the comments that i got during my class crit .....

• Develop the jump of the man on to the bull
• Move the arm when walking
• Put more bull behind the fence, then multiply to replicate a herd
• Keep swinging arm when bucking
• Follow the cowboy when flying
• The background is moving in the wrong direction
• Create more in background like mountains and cactus
• Horizon is too high
• Leave dust if the cowboy lands to imply a rough landing
• Could make guitar guy different to flying guy and the flying guy goes past
• Flip arm so the thumb is on the inside
• Cant use gun sounds due to advertsing rules
• Could use sounds like bull, lasso and ye ha
• Could add clouds to the sky to add more character