Here is my video after my crit, i have made the changes that were suggested by classmates and i have also added a double beat to the soundtrack to create more impact on the viewer.
Then i uploaded the video to you tube and asked class mates to comment on the sequence and here is my feedback
• Double beat (mixed feeling was and was’nt good)
• I don't like how the "Ahhh" cuts out at the end
• The heat waves in the oven are good
• I don't know about that orange circle thing
• All the salad stuff is good
• Removing the blue from that electric effect has made it look better
• At the end maybe zoom in instead of out, or just keep it still.
Then i uploaded the video to you tube and asked class mates to comment on the sequence and here is my feedback
• Double beat (mixed feeling was and was’nt good)
• I don't like how the "Ahhh" cuts out at the end
• The heat waves in the oven are good
• I don't know about that orange circle thing
• All the salad stuff is good
• Removing the blue from that electric effect has made it look better
• At the end maybe zoom in instead of out, or just keep it still.
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