Friday 23 October 2009

Class Crit Comments

Here are the suggestions of my classmates

• Heat waves should be less wobbly at first and more as they go through the film
• When getting meal out of the oven they should be more heat waves
• Add a colour glow in the oven
• The ripple needs tweaking
• Look at desert heat for heat waves
• Reduce ripple & add a glow
• Like static
• Like bag explosion
• Change static colour (gray would be a good colour)
• Pase of the film could be worked on
• Try a different effect for the ending, tilt dosent work
• Ahh could be longer
• Steam workes well
• Could use zoom for ending

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