Here i have my suggestion from my crit
- Heat waves should be less wobbly at first and more as they go through the film
- When getting meal out of the oven they should be more heat waves
- Change static colour (gray would be a good colour)
- Try a different effect for the ending, tilt dosent work
- The ripple needs tweaking
here are what i plan to do now that i have had my crit
- Increased the wave size throughout the film
- Add a colour glow in the oven
- Add a oven glow where the heat comes from
- Change the lightening to grey and turn down the opacity
- Changthe tilt to a zoom
- Change the ripple to a more convincing effect
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